Revision Plans 11/3/16
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Possibly use a still shot of him in the beginning instead of a black screen with subtitles OR use image from Cara of Haiti shoes
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Try to make it sound more like a refugee project
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Change the title page to “Quest for Refuge”
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Add more about what has happened in Haiti to make the public think a certain way
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Include more of why he left - Bring in sentence about mother not being able to care for him
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No scrolling text - keep those texts still
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Add more images or take the only one out - include video of campus soon
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Add a Credits page at the end as a works cited
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Set up the website more for the audience as he talks about it
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Change "educate yourself" to something less demanding
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Move "hurricane Matthew" clip to the end - then "Haiti in his heart" clip as just audio (no visual) as the ending
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